The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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The growing influence of human beings and the race of

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life comes with a price of extinction and loss of

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is causing the extinction of our natural

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and species. In

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its fastest speed of evolution

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of development, but at what cost? The humans

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leading to lack of the

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, leading to cutting down of forest and mountains, These two are home for many of the birds , animals, plants etc which are all part of our natural

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leads to pushing these out of their homes, which is leading to loss of their lives , The market for the greed of

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is unacceptable and can never be filled the influence of the

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off which requires rare and

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animal hunting , poaching , the skins of animals , elephants tusk , teeth of

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all these are targeted by the greed of human leading them to the verge of extinction, many animals birds are gone extinct due to these

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to save these disasters of other species strict laws are brought into action but

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too these are somewhat active in black markets, the only solution is the

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automatically there will be no supply, The natural

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extinct

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earth will be humans

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Ecosystem
Extinction
Biodiversity
Habitat Destruction
Urbanization
Deforestation
Agricultural Expansion
Pollution
Contaminants
Climate Change
Overexploitation
Invasive Species
Nature Reserves
Marine Protected Areas
Sustainable Practices
Industrial Discharge
Carbon Emissions
Renewable Energy
Energy Efficiency
Reforestation
Public Awareness
Legislation
Habitat Restoration
Wetland Restoration
Coral Reef Rehabilitation

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