The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The growing influence of human beings and the race of
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life comes with a price of extinction and loss of
biodiversity
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the worlds ecosystem
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the world's ecosystem
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is causing the extinction of our natural
biodiversity
and species. In
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am going to
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discuss
the causes and the solution to
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modern era problem The human race is
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its fastest speed of evolution
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in addition
to it ,the growing population is leading to
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of acquiring the
lands
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, The
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of development, but at what cost? The humans
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on
aquiring
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acquiring
more and more
land
furthermore
leading to lack of the
land
, leading to cutting down of forest and mountains, These two are home for many of the birds , animals, plants etc which are all part of our natural
biodiversity
, The growing demand for
land
leads to pushing these out of their homes, which is leading to loss of their lives , The market for the greed of
human
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is unacceptable and can never be filled the influence of the
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to
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standard of living and
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off which requires rare and
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luxurious
items leading to a big market
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animal hunting , poaching , the skins of animals , elephants tusk , teeth of
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all these are targeted by the greed of human leading them to the verge of extinction, many animals birds are gone extinct due to these
unpleasent
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unpleasant
events,
moreover
to save these disasters of other species strict laws are brought into action but
then
too these are somewhat active in black markets, the only solution is the
cuttting
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cutting
demand, if people stop buying these things
then
automatically there will be no supply, The natural
biodiversity
and species are almost
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the verge of
extint
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extinct
, only
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for these
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events and
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are humans and their greed , if
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thing
occours
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occurs
further
then
theday
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the day
is not far when the only thing left
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this
earth will be humans
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ecosystem
  • Extinction
  • Biodiversity
  • Habitat Destruction
  • Urbanization
  • Deforestation
  • Agricultural Expansion
  • Pollution
  • Contaminants
  • Climate Change
  • Overexploitation
  • Invasive Species
  • Nature Reserves
  • Marine Protected Areas
  • Sustainable Practices
  • Industrial Discharge
  • Carbon Emissions
  • Renewable Energy
  • Energy Efficiency
  • Reforestation
  • Public Awareness
  • Legislation
  • Habitat Restoration
  • Wetland Restoration
  • Coral Reef Rehabilitation
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