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The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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The growing influence of human beings and the race of
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today's
todays
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today's
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 life comes with a price of extinction and loss of
biodiversity
, The human influence on
the worlds ecosystem
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the world's ecosystem
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 is causing the extinction of our natural
biodiversity
 and species. In
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today's
today
todays
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essay
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i
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disscuss
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discuss
 the causes and the solution to
this
 modern era problem The human race is
on
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 its fastest speed of evolution
inaddition
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in addition
 to it ,the growing population is leading to
war
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 of acquiring the
lands
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, The
land
 is
necessary
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source
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 of development, but at what cost? The humans
keeps
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 on
aquiring
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acquiring
 more and more
land
furthermore
 leading to lack of the
land
, leading to cutting down of forest and mountains, These two are home for many of the birds , animals, plants etc which are all part of our natural
biodiversity
, The growing demand for
land
 leads to pushing these out of their homes, which is leading to loss of their lives , The market for the greed of
human
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 is unacceptable and can never be filled the influence of the
modern day
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 limelight
leading
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 to
high
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a high
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 standard of living and
show
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showing
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 off which requires rare and
luxirious
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luxurious
 items leading to a big market
of
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 animal hunting , poaching , the skins of animals , elephants tusk , teeth of
shark
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 all these are targeted by the greed of human leading them to the verge of extinction, many animals birds are gone extinct due to these
unpleasent
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unpleasant
 events,
moreover
 to save these disasters of other species strict laws are brought into action but
then
 too these are somewhat active in black markets, the only solution is the
cuttting
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cutting
 demand, if people stop buying these things
then
 automatically there will be no supply, The natural
biodiversity
 and species are almost
in
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 the verge of
extint
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extinct
, only
responsible
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ones responsible
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 for these
unplesant
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unpleasant
 events and
disaster
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 are humans and their greed , if
same
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 thing
occours
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occurs
further
then
theday
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the day
 is not far when the only thing left
in
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this
 earth will be humans
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