Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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is a crucial method for scientists to tackle medical problems. I believe that some of those are easy to justify and there are

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the human chronic illnesses by doing research on

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has been generated due to the suffering of

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been developed successfully without killing lives.

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different journals and research papers,

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entirely justified and appropriate while the others disagree. I believe that necessary experimentation on

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resources and analyzing data online effectively should be strictly controlled.

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Your opinion

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