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Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people argued about the function of teaching at the
university
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. The general public believes that studying at an
education
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 establishment helps graduate
students
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 get a prestigious job, while others believe that studying at a
university
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education
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 establishment provides a much broader positive experience than getting an
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 degree workplace. In
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 essay, I will examine and discuss both points of view. On one hand, it is a fact that the
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 goal of studying at a
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 is to help graduates find employment. Educational institutions hope that the curricula, programs and training sessions they have prepared and implemented will be useful to their graduate
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 in the workplace.
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, some highly paid positions require the candidate to have a
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 higher
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.
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, to become an external auditor for one of the top four international accounting firms,
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 as Price Water House Coopers, the candidate must have a bachelor's degree in accounting and be a certified public accountant. Because it is a mandatory requirement, many teenagers have gone to
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 to get
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 elite and prestigious job.
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, many human beings believe that the main goal of becoming educated is to be better employed.
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, another group of people believe that a
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education
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 provides
students
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 and communities with a different positive experience.
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, while studying at a
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,
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 will have more friends, since many universities accept
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 from different regions, and some even from abroad. In
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 way,
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 will have the opportunity to expand their networks as well as explore new languages and cultures.
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, studying at the
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 benefits society. The
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 offers a variety of positive activities for its
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 that benefit the neighbourhood as well.
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, many medical schools offer free drug counselling to the poor living in the area, run by their
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. In conclusion, some people believe that studying at a
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 is much more beneficial for
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 than getting a better paying assignment, but others do not agree with
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. From my point of view, I agree that the goal of studying at the
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 should be not only getting an appointment but
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 with acquaintances
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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