In many countries , a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country , but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level .Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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people
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salary
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salaries
fee
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people
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population
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society
) believe that Use synonyms
this
is good for the Linking Words
country
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governments
should not allow Use synonyms
salaries
(Use synonyms
fee
, pay, Use synonyms
earnings
) above a certain level. Only a small portion of Use synonyms
people
(community Use synonyms
population
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society
) earn excessively high Use synonyms
salaries
(Use synonyms
fee
, pay, Use synonyms
earnings
) in many countries. The most(most Use synonyms
yok
) biggest impact of Use synonyms
this
statement is increasing competition to grow up their Linking Words
country
. individuals who are staying back (in) the(the Use synonyms
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) Use synonyms
this
race, be jealous(kıskanç) to(of) (a) productive Linking Words
people
(community Use synonyms
population
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society
) but if the Use synonyms
governments
don’t allow a highly(high) Use synonyms
salaries
(Use synonyms
fee
, pay, Use synonyms
earnings
) , (the) criminal event(s) will be able to decrease because of equal Use synonyms
people
.
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the Add a comma
,increasing
salaries
(Use synonyms
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people
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communities
population
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society
), everybody try(tries) to find innumerable new resources to be rich which impacts of(of Use synonyms
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For instance
, America has 250 million individuals maybe even more, but only a small portion of Linking Words
people
is intelligent, just 10 million. if we move to Use synonyms
this
(these) Linking Words
people
to another Use synonyms
country
, the new America will be. because their contribution(katkı) is (the) explicit benefit of(to) the Use synonyms
country
.In return for Use synonyms
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they just want to(to Add a comma
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money
(a bill) to increase (their) quality of life.
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many Add a comma
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people
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governments
(politics) should not allow Use synonyms
to be
(to be Change the verb form
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) the Use synonyms
ultra rich
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ultra-rich
this
statement because there are many advantages Linking Words
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(to) Change preposition
apply
this
opinion. Maybe the Linking Words
governments
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a
(a Change the article
an
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) powerless can receive the bribe(rüşvet) so the criminals will be able to get comfortable. The most impact of(of Use synonyms
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this
issue is given(to give) (the) same Linking Words
money
to everyone.
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money
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people
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society
) because everyone Use synonyms
want
(s) to Change the verb form
wants
good
life. only one way to gain is (the) added value(Add an article
the good
a good
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değer). Correct your spelling
karma
kama
Although
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people
want everyone to be equal, Use synonyms
money
is necessary to go more(more Use synonyms
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further
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