The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Currently, despite the many drawbacks of our world, a myriad

people

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are considering

this

contemporary epoch to be the best of its kind. Personally, I agree to a large

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with

this

concept.

However

, not

eveyone

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everyone

does as there are many more interesting historical eras that should be considered.

Thus

, the underlying factors of

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contention as well as my intuition will be

further

explained.

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, the modern era is considered to be the most convenient time for humans to ever exist for many reasons.

First

of all, the tremendous breakthrough

that is

happening now is providing citizens with all kinds of solutions to their lives. Everything, from advanced mobile phones for easier communication to better transportation systems,

in addition

to improved agriculture, nutrition, healthcare, education and

evey

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every

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human life is far less challenging compared to the past thanks to scientific innovation. In fact, the average life expectancy has almost doubled in only

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hundered

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hundred

hundreds

years according to

study

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that has been published by

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Nature magazine.

Hence

, it can be said that technological progress has not only

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to improved quality of individuals' lives, but it

also

saved many patients due to better healthcare capabilities.

On the other hand

, there

also

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other interesting historical timeframes that can be quite intriguing.

For instance

, the classical

age

, spanning from the bronze

age

until the

roman

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conquest of

middle

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east, is

one

the

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most exciting periods. Actually, if there

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any alternatives to our modern time

one

is ought to choose from, that

age

can be

one

of them.

This

is because at that time many interesting characters

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lived.

For example

, Alexander the Great who has brought the world to its knees by conquering all of the ancient Persian Empire and built many cities that are named after him like the renowned city of

Alexanderia

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Alexandria

, Egypt.

Therefore

, it can

observed

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that the classical

age

is

one

the

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most exquisite times to be after our modern times. In

conclusion

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after

this

essay has manifested the abovementioned points, it can be reiterated that

although

there are many fascinating

hisorical

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historical

figures and places

such

as

Anicent

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Ancient

Greece or Egypt, the living era is undoubtedly the most convenient to be in because of the many inventions and systems that make people's lives easier, and I am a staunch believer of that.