Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opionion.

The adverse effects which have been done by

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system are of great concern

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the public. People hold

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of whether some measures can be done to solve the situation. From my perspective, it is true that some changes permanently affect the biosystem, but there

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still a wide range of solutions which can help improve biodiversity. It cannot be denied that mankind

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done irreversible

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to the environment, which

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caused the extinction of many

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, the

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of the mountains which contain natural resources,

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as coal, gas and metal, seems unavoidable. Since

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behaviour seriously damages animals' habitats, some

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die

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out. During the

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process, the flora of that area may

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the verge of extinction. If some

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have extincted, there indeed is no way to make any difference.

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, I am convinced that the public

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able to find a way to protect the creatures which face a high risk of

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out. Recent decades have seen a rising awareness of biosystem conservation,

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the governments and the public have made concerted efforts to that. One popular action is that many rare

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are raised by specialists in zoos or other special sites, which plays a significant role in conserving animals and plants. Another conducive action is that in order to protect natural habitats, overexploit is now banned in many countries.

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, hunting rare animals is illegal in many countries, and compared to years before, more people believe that losing biological diversity would assert

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impact on mankind. In my opinion,

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some damages can not be solved, a wide range of activities are worth to be taken to improve biodiversity. Under no circumstances can we stop finding out ways to solve ecological problems.