Many manufactured food and drinks products contain high levels of sugar, which casuses many health problmes. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourge people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or diagree?

Many food and drinks produced in factories contain elevated levels of sugar, which causes many

health

issues. To push people to eat less sugary products they should be made more expensive.

This

essay agrees with

this

notion because more expensive items are bought less and the money made could be invested back into the

health

system to treat said

health

issues. Increasing the price of highly sweetened items will decrease its sale.

That is

to say, in general, expensive items of any kind are less purchased,

this

fact should be applied to said issue.

This

is compounded more when taken into account that sweet products are mostly consumed by the lower class

thus

making it an expensive item

will

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be highly effective.

For example

, in 2015 Israel's government increased the levies for sweet products,

this

change had a great effect on purchases, decreasing them by 25%.

Furthermore

, the income made by increasing the price could be reinvested in the public

health

system to deal with the

health

problems associated with sugar consumption.

In other words

, High blood pressure,diabetes and many other well-being issues are connected to the over ingestion of sugar creating a burden on public

health

,

thus

the profits from the levies paid by them could be used to treat them when needed.

For example

, In Spain the price of cigarettes is extremely high,

this

is from the belief that they are unhealthy and in a few years the person who bought them will require treatment and

this

is how they pay for it. To conclude, In my opinion, an increase in prices should be applied, because the increase in taxes will decrease the number of purchases made and it will better the public

health