Many animals are becoming endangered due to the loss of their natural habitat through urban development and deforestation. Is it important to protect animals? How can we solve this problem?

Many

animals

today are in danger of disappearing. As the population grows, we need more houses and facilities and,

therefore

, we have to create more land by cutting down trees.

This

leads to

animals

losing their natural homes.

This

essay will discuss why I believe we need to help these

animals

and

also

consider how we can do

this

.

Firstly

, some people say we should not protect endangered

animals

because that would be interfering with nature, but I believe we should. When we cut down forests to build cities, we are changing the environment, so we need to think about all of the plants and

animals

in order to keep a balance.

For example

, pandas eat only bamboo, and when

this

plant is destroyed, they cannot adapt and survive;

therefore

, people are causing the problem, so it is our responsibility to find an answer. There are several ways in which we can help to protect

animals

in danger.

Firstly

, the government needs to be more careful when planning new developments; they need to examine the land they are using and decide if it should be protected.

Additionally

, the public

need

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needs

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to be more aware;

we

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that we

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should not use products like rhino horn which harm endangered

animals

.

This

is very important and we need to be more involved if we want our children to see the same

animals

in the future. In conclusion,

it is clear that

we need to protect

animals

more in the future if we want to be sure that future generations can enjoy them. To protect

this

wildlife, it is important that both the government and the public become more involved.