It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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birth and some say that these abilities can be thought
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their mentors.
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of the famous
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proud, became so talented
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their childhood. The perfect example of
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a character is Albert Einstein who was the greatest
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mathematician
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physics as he believed himself from
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interest of talents that they practice during their academics will result
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positive impact on the community.
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not show any clear interest
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their life goals. To elaborate, there is a saying that a single school
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to close thousands of prisons.
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if the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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