In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest？
The issue of students' disruptive behaviour in
schools
has sparked great concern. In my opinion, two main reasons have dominant effects on this
problem, and it is certain that we can take some steps to tackle the situation.
Both families and the public have exerted adverse impacts on children
. With the rising living cost, parents
are likely to spend more time earning money rather than looking after their children
. In this
case, parents
have little time to teach their children
how to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore
, it is not uncommon that children
to act up in school. Another main reason is that most children
are now exposed to electronic games
which usually contain violence to a certain extent. Children
are so ignorant and curious that they may imitate the violence in school.
To solve the problem, parents
, schools
and the government should make a concerted effort. Parents
are encouraged to spend more time with their children
and instil high moral values in them. Also
, schools
play a dominant part in teaching children
both knowledge and ethic. Last
but not least, the governments are suggested to put limits on violent games
or even introduce laws to forbid children
from a long-time explosion of violent games
. For example
, the authorities can order the companies which research and operate violent games
to only offer access to the games
to adults.
To conclude, in my opinion, both parents
and the public are responsible for children
's poor behaviour in schools
. To solve that, parents
, schools
and the governments should make a cooperative effort.Submitted by monicahe0211 on
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