Some people think that all universty students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an argument between two groups of
people
about studying subjects
in universities. One group claim that students
should study
whatever they like and follow their passion in comparison with other people
who believe that they must study
some subjects
which have a good fortune like science and technology.
According to
the first group, if students
try to find their favourite subjects
, they will become talented and show their skills in most cases. There are many fields of study
like art, philosophy, geography, science, technology, sports, and medical subjects
that any country needs to improve in each field. Thus
, it is better to give a chance to students
to find their path and try to be the best in their careers. The variety of subjects
can complete each one. To approach this
idea, parents and teachers are important people
who can engage and guide youngsters in the right way.
On the other hand
, some individuals think that choosing specific subjects
makes a good future for students
. This
idea cannot be practical because many students
may have some challenges during their period of education. For example
, they may not come up with concepts of lessons and do not understand well. In addition
, they will be annoyed in giving exams because they do not like this
field of study
. So, these reasons would cause depression and they cannot resist difficulties. Therefore
, some preferences like selecting useful subjects
for studying in universities are so risky in my point of view,and I disagree with this
idea.
To sum up
, some people
think that it is better for students
to study
their favourite subjects
. In contrast
, other groups believe that they have just chosen scientific and technological topics for study
because they are useful in future.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your arguments and make them more convincing.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and expands on it in an organized manner.
coherence cohesion
Conclude your essay with a summary of the discussed points and a clear final opinion.
task achievement
You have effectively introduced the two perspectives in the opening.
task achievement
Your argument about the risks of pushing students into certain fields is well-articulated.
coherence cohesion
Paragraphs flow logically and transitions are generally smooth.
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