Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In

this

contemporary era, the problems related to

traffic

congestion and

pollution

are mounting dangerously. I completely agree with the given fact that if the

price

of petrol increases, the

traffic

and

pollution

issues would be solved.

This

essay will

also

suggest some solutions to alleviate these trends.

To begin

with, there are myriad points behind my agreement. The most prominent one is that increasing the

price

of petrol would reduce the extensive

use

of private

vehicles

. To elucidate

further

,

this

will not only reduce

the

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traffic

congestion but

also

increase the

use

of public

transportation

.

for instance

, A survey conducted by ILO in 2015, revealed that on average, people who own a car

use

public

transportation

90% less than the masses who do not have

any

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car. Apart from

this

, if the Consumption of fuel

reduced

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, the

pollution

will

also

be reduced as the burning down of fossil fuels are the main source of environmental

pollution

.

Therefore

. it is clear that there are viable reasons behind my agreement.

In addition

, there are other measures

such

as increasing

Vat

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on

of

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private

vehicles

as well as making public

transportation

convenient for the populace.

Moreover

, if the

price

of the

vehicles

increase

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, people will less likely to buy private

vehicles

.

Besides

this

, Public

transportation

should be made more accessible so that the

populations

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population

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can

use

it more conveniently.

furthermore

,

government

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the government

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can subsidize

the

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public

transportation

to encourage Citizens to

use

it.

for example

, Luxembourg, a

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country

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in Europe, facilitates free transport

service

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services

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which reduces the amount of

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greenhouse

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green house

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greenhouse

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gas produced by that nation.

Hence

, These steps can be taken to reduce

the

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traffic

congestion and

pollution

. In conclusion, In spite of the fact that higher petrol

price

can be the most effective way to reduce the number of

traffic

and

pollution

, expansion of vat on private

vehicles

and improving public transport system can

also

be a key factor.

Nevertheless

, I believe that governments would take

necessary

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steps in the order to

potect

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protect

the environment.