You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing regarding the article about travelling to Tehran that you recently published in your magazine.
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I have considered your magazine the most respectable one in Linking Words
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field worldwide, I found some errors in Linking Words
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article that I want to inform you.
There is a paragraph concerning the danger of going outside after midnight. I can assure you that the government implements the necessary safeguards to generate a safe condition for regular folks. People can see officers patrolling at night who convey the feeling of safety to visitors. Linking Words
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, it is mentioned that there is no chance of finding food after 11 pm. As Tehran is a lively city, there are many cafes and restaurants that are kept open even after midnight.
As most tourists turn to and rely on the content of your magazine, you must publish truthful information. Linking Words
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, travellers will read and rely on your written articles without being bewildered when they arrive at their destinations.
So, I would like to suggest revising the mentioned publication and republishing it Linking Words
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week. I propose that you can highlight it or write it in a box to draw the readers’ attention.
I look forward to seeing the revised report.
Kind regard,
Dorsa ShekoftehLinking Words
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,