In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains betwee cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing pub transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It's thought, by some
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in many countries that the government must spend a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
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money
on building a new road and railway
for fast train between cities, whilst other
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and give my opinion.
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To begin
, several people
believe that building New Roads and Railway
for fast train between cities will save time
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the time
people
, such
as some people
want to travel from City
to City
it will take less time than before, also
the people
effort will be decrease
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Furthermore
, the city
will appear modern and Beautiful. As a result
. The government should spend more money
on constructing a new Railway
.
Moreover
, numerous people
think that the money
should be spent on improving the existing infrastructure. To explain the money
could invest in other fields and that will be batter then
spend large money
on transport. For instance
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on transport. Consequently
. The people
should save the
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money
and invest in other fields.
In conclusion, I believe that spend
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attracts
many tourists and the Change the verb form
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city
will be famous of
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, fantastic investment because a lot of people
will buy a ticket and after many years they will get back the money
they spent on building railway
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