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Living in a a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social. problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or dis agrees

#country #language #dis
To be settled abroad in any international
country
, we need to have a strong command of that
country
's native
language
. It is agreed that if we have weaknesses in
this
 regard we may face several difficulties in terms of maintaining a relationship with the citizens of
this
 foreign
country
 as well some problems in the field of opportunities that we can opt
by
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 improving our
language
 skills. Analysing the incapabilities of speaking a foreign
language
 many of us would only prefer the way they are talking despite having
grasped
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of
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the situation. Living in abroad with completely familiar with its
language
 is very important. The primary advantage of having a full skill in communicating a foreign
language
 is that you understand everything about that
country
 and it cultivates to gain more information and knowledge about the
country
 itself. It is universally believed that communication skills are of vital importance in
this
 contemporary world
thus
, it often leads to creating several working opportunities across the globe. Another advantage of speaking an international
language
 is that it may create excellent social relationships with the residents of that particular
country
, it becomes very easy to communicate with their
language
 so may get some positive things from
this
. If someone
who
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has a very strong linguistic command
on
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of
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
then
 he or she may have some advantages for that like they can
intereact
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interact
 with the residents of
this
country
 very easily can communicate well with others it will
leads
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 to create
strong
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a strong
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 bonding with that particular society in a
well
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good
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 manner. To conclude, for many people there might not be difficulties of not having command of their native
language
 but it is strongly recommended to have
a good speaking skills
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good speaking skills
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 in its foreign
language
 so that anyone will not face serious issues.
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