Modern technology is changing our world. It has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication; it also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In

this

contemporary world,

technology

has become a major key factor

for

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our life.

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, with

this

automation

era

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we have opportunities to get advantages like communication

wit

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each other, while as a flip of the coin,

also

turn as a drawback

such

as

use

to destroy cultures because of selfish and useless matters. I believe,

computer based

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science

provide

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more valuable elements rather than

it's

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downsides.In

this

essay, I want to explain what are the positive and negative

effect

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,

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of, uses

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uses

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of

technology

.

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with

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majority of

human

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humans

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are able to get various information and access through

this

technology

. Of course,

tele-communication

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telecommunication

telecommunications

is one of the best usage

module

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among

public

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.

For example

, students who are abroad without their family members, frequently conversate with their loved ones to make strong relationships with each other.

For instance

, in

this

covid-19

pandamic

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pandemic

period, employers

use

to do their job assignments through digital platforms.

Such

as nowadays, school children do their educational studies through e-learning platforms.

Therefore

,

technology

will allow more positive results for our life because it has

wider

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range of possible good factors.

On the other hand

, as long as some persons have detrimental views and inferior habits, they gain technological tools and access to create unhealthy

background

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and issues in the community.

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, racists who want to break peace and humanity among people,

they

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gain digital services to develop their notions and negativities. Wherever

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human beings usually

use

social media. it may sometimes become

more

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miserable stage when cultures would be destroyed by bad users. In conclusion, If we

use

technology

for our personal

developments

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, like

job related

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projects and studies, it will

definetely

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definitely

impact in a beneficial manner in our life. Unless

,

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we gain detrimental information through

this

.

However

, it will become more

benefit

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and advantageous.I believe,

technology

has positive reactions than Negative results.