In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is a large number of Individuals
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interested in exploring local accommodations’
history
.In
this
essay, I will list my reasons and methods for finding out the
history
. In terms of the reasons why
people
like to know the
history
of accommodations, on one hand,
people
want to study local culture. Through getting to know
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in
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local, ancient
people
built houses mostly due to
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environment.
For example
, Eskimos live in the Arctic region. Their traditional
buildings
are snow houses.
That is
because they could not use wood to build houses in the snow.On other hand, understanding
history
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a lot
for
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buildings
can make residents generate a sense of belonging. To be specific,
people
can find many stories
such
as legends or real stories when they researched
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history
.The appealing stories can deeply impress
people
and touch them to live in
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. In regards to the means for helping civil to learn about local
architectures
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can visit local museums of Old
Buildings
.
These
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museum
can introduce the evolution of local
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to visitors. Take
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museum
of
old
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building
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in
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Gulangyu island as an example, in Xiamen province, local historic
buildings
are turned into a
museum
.
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the island,
people
can see
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traditional accommodation, European architecture and so on. Different architecture styles eventually formed Xiamen building styles. In conclusion, the reasons behind the phenomenon are expecting to learn about local
history
and make residents have a sense of belonging. I propose that those who are keen on researching local architecture can visit the
museum
of old
buildings
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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