Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is believed by some people that in order to limit

traffic

and environmental

problems

namely pollution is by increasing the fuels' prices. I have to disagree with

this

statement because I reckon that

this

would only widen social inequality.

Instead

, there are more rational and effective measures that could be taken to solve these

problems

.

Firstly

, it is true that increasing the

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of

petrol

can indeed reduce

traffic

issues

such

as

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traffic jams

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and road

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safety

since there won't be a lot of vehicles meaning less risk of accidents,

this

also

means less

toxics

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emission.

However

,

this

also

means that only rich people who can afford the expensive

petrol

price would be able to drive their cars, not only that

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but rising the price would automatically result in public

transportation

higher costs and the

augementation

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augmentation

of living

expense

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.

For example

, most trades are based on

petrol

because the goods

transportation

would be done by truck or

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aeroplane

aeroplanes

or other fuel means of transport.

Therefore

, I find

this

to be the utter

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since it would cause a colossal economic crisis. There are many alternatives that could be taken

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consideration to solve

traffic

and pollution

problems

.

Firstly

, the government should be responsible for the public

transportation

service improvement.

In other words

, if buses were convenient it will draw more people to use them resulting in reducing

traffic-congestions

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and our carbon

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footprint

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foot-print

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. In conclusion, while it is deemed that increasing

petrol

prices is capable of resolving

traffic

issues as well as pollution

problems

, I think that

this

would cause more challenges than it would solve, and

therefore

, I believe that improving the

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service

quality of public

transportation

.