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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#cultures #technology #tradition
The development of
techlonogy
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technology
 could make some
cultures
 disappear. Some
people
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that
technology
 and tradition can not coexist with tradition. In my opinion, I partly agree with
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modernization
 will cause
cultures
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 and my reason will be outlined. On the one hand, it is admitted that
technology
offer
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 some clear benefits to
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maintaining
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traditional
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. The primary merit of
technology
 is that
provide
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provides
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 knowledge of
cultures
 to
people
. To explain, the
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smartphone
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smart phone
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smartphone
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 can help
people
 search the internet which has plenty of information about their culture. Another advantage of cutting-edge
technology
 is that can bring our
traditional
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 to the foreigner.
To
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 particular, our
cultures
 will be more popular
to
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with
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 tourists who do not know;
as a result
, local
people
 will understand the
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in
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of
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 their
cultures
.
For example
, a product of
technology
 called Facebook is a social media which can connect local
people
 and
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 to
has
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have
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 a
culture
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cultural
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 conversation,
thus
foreigner
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foreigners
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 will know more about their
cultures
.
On the other hand
, there still exist some drawbacks of
technology
 to traditional.
Firstly
, the development of
technology
 could be disadvantageous because it
cause
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 some changes in our culture. To give a clear
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, on
“Tet
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the “Tet
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 holiday”
people
 often make “Chung cake” which is a traditional cake
in
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on
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this
 day but when the shopping online
develop
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,
people
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 tend to buy the already-made Chung cake
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instead
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in stead
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 of
make
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 it with their family.
Secondly
, the development of
technology
 could mean
people
 will
more
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lazier and they do not want to meet their family face to face. To clarify,
people
 can use the social media app to make
video
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 call
in
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during
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 the day when the time
family
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for family
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 gathering.
For instance
,
people
 decide to use Zalo to make video
call
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 when they can not
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come back
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comeback
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come back
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 home
in
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 tet holiday. If they do not change their habits, they will
lost
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lose
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 their traditional
cultures
. In conclusion, while modernization appears to be beneficial for some reasons, including
bring
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 information
of
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about
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cultures
for
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to
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people
, I still
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that the negative impacts it may expert are considerable,
such
 as
people
make
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making
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video
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a video
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call
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calls
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 on social media
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instead
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in stead
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instead
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 of meeting in their home in traditional days.
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