It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
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could make some Correct your spelling
technology
cultures
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believe
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that Correct your spelling
believe
technology
and tradition can not coexist with tradition. In my opinion, I partly agree with Use synonyms
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modernization
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and my reason will be outlined.
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provides
cultures
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smartphone
smart phone
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people
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technology
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traditional
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technology
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cause
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people
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instead
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people
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more
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family
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on
lost
their traditional Change the verb form
lose
be lost
cultures
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about
cultures
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believe
belive
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believe
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instead
in stead
of meeting in their home in traditional days.Correct your spelling
instead
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