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Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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These days, a lot of
people
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 are preferring their own start-up rather than working for another company or employer.
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 is mainly because self-employment enables them to
work
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 Independently and brings increased job
satisfaction
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. On the downside, there is no guaranteed income and not enough knowledge. To start with, self-employment brings Independence to
people
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 where they get the flexibility to arrange their own schedule and
work
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 around their other commitments which leads to a better quality of life.
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 is possible because they can
work
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 at a time convenient to them.
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, being your own boss takes away the stress of office hours, deadlines, and getting
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 leave application approved. Another advantage is increased job
satisfaction
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, which means
people
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 can personally reap the rewards
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of
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 their own hard
work
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.
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, launching one’s own
business
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 has become quite easy now because of the
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.
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, it does not require a huge initial investment to launch a
business
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 online or from home.
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, there are so many ways to get entrepreneur tax deductions to reduce
business
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 taxes (and costs).
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, it is very lucrative for entrepreneurs to get independence and
work
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satisfaction
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 on their terms.
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, there are several drawbacks to
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.
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, in the beginning, their income may be a lot lower than their previous salary. Actually, it might take them years to break even, which will require immense perseverance.
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, recently in the event of a pandemic, small businesses suffered
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 recession and some of them were the first ones to shut down.
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, when
people
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 are self-employed, they start with very little real knowledge of the
business
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, which can prove detrimental.
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, they sometimes underestimate the expenses, and overhead costs, undermine competitors and could end up working 16 to 18 hours a day especially, in the initial stages. In conclusion,
people
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 are choosing the self-employment option because of its flexibility and increased workforce
satisfaction
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. Even if it is true that they are unlikely to make a lot of money in the beginning, they can enjoy more freedom and better profit in the future. The main downside is that there is no guaranteed monthly income.

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