Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays there is too much
crime
Use synonyms
in most states and there is a need to try and deal with
this
Linking Words
problem. Certain individuals believe that criminals must be given longer
sentences
Use synonyms
in
prison
Use synonyms
while others think there are other ways for
crime
Use synonyms
reduction. I,
however
Linking Words
, think that there are other alternatives
besides
Linking Words
giving long
prison
Use synonyms
sentences
Use synonyms
to offenders. The essay below will discuss both views in depth.
To begin
Linking Words
with, breaking the law is sometimes involuntary.
People
Use synonyms
live with different stress and pressure which sometimes force them to do certain crimes.
This
Linking Words
is why I support the idea that there are other options for reducing
crime
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, a study conducted in Ethiopia showed that 34% of offenders especially teenager thieves were coming from child-headed families. Thieving became their lifestyle as they tried to fend for their siblings with no adult to help.
Instead
Linking Words
of taking
such
Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
to
prison
Use synonyms
, the government should provide food and counselling services for them.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, some
people
Use synonyms
think giving longer
prison
Use synonyms
sentences
Use synonyms
is the best way to deal with lawbreakers. They mention that
prison
Use synonyms
is a rehabilitation centre for criminals. I think
this
Linking Words
point is invalid because the
jail
Use synonyms
does not change some
people
Use synonyms
's bad habits,
instead
Linking Words
they come out with new strategies for committing offences.
For example
Linking Words
, a study done in South Africa in 2014 showed that 54% of convicts when freed out of
jail
Use synonyms
resorted to
crime
Use synonyms
on purpose because
jail
Use synonyms
became their
second
Linking Words
home.
This
Linking Words
is proof enough that locking them in
jail
Use synonyms
is not enough, more needs to be done. In conclusion, I think there are other ways of reducing
crime
Use synonyms
other than long
jail
Use synonyms
sentences
Use synonyms
because committing a
crime
Use synonyms
is at times caused by difficult situations which need government intervention.
However
Linking Words
, some think lawbreakers should rot in
jail
Use synonyms
as it changes their perspectives. These and more issues have been discussed at length in the essay above.
Submitted by 1155131483 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: