You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter, – ask for details of the course – ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers – request that the institution sends you their brochure

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Dear Sir,
Last
week, I came across an advertisement in the local newspaper regarding an evening course to study a foreign language. I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the same, as well as want to obtain a few details regarding that.
Firstly
, I am keen to learn French;
thus
, want to understand the price of the entire course.
Besides
that, it will be great if I get a detailed understanding of the entire structure: — like how (online or classroom) & when the classes are conducted, and the various mediums that are used in teaching.
Furthermore
, the various ways that are used to focus on the speaking part, as
that is
crucial for any language.
In addition
to that, I
also
want to obtain information on whether the teachers are native speakers or not.
Also
, if they are certified by the European language council to conduct classes. Could I please get a brochure with all the relevant details in my communication address
that is
mentioned as the sender's address on the envelope? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Krishna Kumar C V
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • despite

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