More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.

Individuals in every corner of the globe

are tend

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to

perchase

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purchase

the latest design of

clothes

to look shick and fashionable.

Although

,

this

notion carry's some

favorable

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favourable

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points

but

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I personally think

this

is a negative development and

negative

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the negative

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effects

of spending money

for

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on

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being fashionable outweigh the

postive

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positive

effects

.

This

essay will cover both

favorable

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favourable

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and

unfavorable

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unfavourable

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effects

in detail. one serious problem that can arise from enormous

clothes

shoping

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shopping

for being

shick

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sick

is that it can lead to uncomfortableness. Before the fashion popularity , people used to wear simple but

well ordered

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cloth which

was

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were

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affordable and casual to wear in any condition and location, as old folks used to wear a

peice

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piece

of cloth for both to a

weading

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wedding

or workplace without

stress

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of choosing between

bunch

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a bunch

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of

opptions

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options

and with ease.

However

, recently public

masess

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masses

are searching for the newest models of

clothes

to put on and satisfy the desire of looking like a

fashionette

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fashionista

person. they

sacrifise

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sacrifice

the

convenient

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to

stress

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of selecting

amoung

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among

many available options. Take edgy

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style

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stile

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style

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as an example, modern individuals spent lots of their

time's

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time

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to sort

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sorting

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out their

bag's

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bags

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,

shoe's

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shoes

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and shirts in one colour in order to reflect a

diffrece

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difference

. Another issue is that

,

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shickness

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sickness

thickness

is expensive. Many have limited earnings which they should decide between buying a new fashionable textile or the needed

matterial

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material

for the

nights

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night's

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dinner. An uncontrolled cloth

shoping

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shopping

may lead to a fiscal

bankrupt

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bankruptcy

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. Most of the

shick

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shock

textile available in the market are

exterimly

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extremely

costy

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costly

and

purcheising

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purchasing

them just for

saticfing

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satisfying

the need

having

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a better look could carry poverty for the person in the long term.

This

not only may bring financial issues but

also

could encourage jealousy for other people who are not able to buy

this

kind of

clothes

. All in all, in

this

modern era many have been tending to shop

new

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for new

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fashionable

clothes

.

However

, I

am still convince

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that the

negatice

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negative

effects

of

this

is

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are

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more than the

postive

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positive

side. As buying

this

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these

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clothes

bring financial difficulties and

unfairnes

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unfairness

also

it could take

cozyness

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cosiness

from the people.