Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays
people
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spend plenty of
money
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to have a wonderful wedding. Since these ceremonies are so special among
people
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, and they do want a wedding without any problems and
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incredible.
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popularity of big weddings brings negative impacts
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couples
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which I discuss in
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essay. As
couples
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want a wedding to be held without trouble, which
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gives guests many services they go for pricy weddings. As long as
couples
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expected to have a memorable wedding, they should pay for an expensive event planner who manages their ceremony with better services
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as various food, suitable songs, and a lovely atmosphere.
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, an outstanding ceremony can receive many compliments from relatives and friends. They might talk about that, in every
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, and review the precise moments they had,
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,
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married
couples
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and their parents,
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, will be satisfied.
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a luxurious wedding that costs considerably would be amusing, they turn to competition among families and friends. Sometimes
people
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spend even more than their income by borrowing
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from others to have an unforgettable wedding, and could not turn the
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back at a suitable time.
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, they can have a beautiful wedding corresponded to their wealth.
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, attending and seeing costly wedding has been raised everyone's expectation which
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them substantially to have big parties; they forget that saving
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to have
better
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future for their life is more important than just a day. In conclusion, to have a perfect and memorable wedding is so important for many
people
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which
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in competition among family or friends, or spend more amount of
money
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lavish
  • extravagant
  • nuptials
  • matrimony
  • social status
  • opulence
  • milestone
  • financial leverage
  • debt
  • peer pressure
  • consumerism
  • showcase event
  • ceremonial splendor
  • bridal extravaganza
  • market forces
  • commercialization
  • budgeting
  • social comparison
  • destinal wedding
  • event planning
  • wedding vendors
  • loan
  • prestige
  • economic impact
  • mandatory spending
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