You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that the problem of illegal drugs can be solved by just legalising all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, all age groups are addicted to medicine ,especially in countries where

drugs

are banned and the public are believing that authorities should need to take action to stop illegal medicine.

However

, few are thinking that if the ministry will legalise

drugs

the illegal distribution problem will resolve. Here, I am showing my disagreement on

this

topic and more details should be covered in upcoming paragraphs. In general, most

drugs

are manufactured by pharmaceutical companies who distribute their

drugs

based on the hospital requirements to save

people

's lives. They are doing a great job for their nations but it is huge problems are created when the population have started the use that

drugs

without consulting

doctors

. For an instance, I am having some health issues and my fever is reached around 100c I went to the hospital and the doctor has checked me and prescribed some medicines and after ,that I feel better but when I have some health issues after 6 months later, I went to the medical store and brought those medicines without consulting

doctors

which is not really good for my health. So, due to

this

,reason

people

are believing to stop

such

activities with help of the government.

However

, some are thinking that if the government has decided to verdict in their favour and give instructions to all medical stores that they can legally distribute the

drugs

whenever

people

need them without consulting

doctors

and hospitals

then

it should be a very big problem for all. Because the reason behind

this

people

never consult the doctor when they are facing huge problems of illness. After

this

decision problem will never solve because few

people

still want

drugs

to which they are already addicted in their life. In conclusion, I would suggest that

instead

of legalising the

drugs

authority should have to start an awareness campaign to make

people

aware of the benefits and drawbacks of grabbing

drugs

that they are taking without consulting the

doctors

and they know very well which

drugs

are suitable for which problems. So, the ministry should take initiative for

this

and start educating society about it.

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illegal drugs
legalisation/legalization
drug trafficking
regulate
stigma
addiction treatment
drug use
addiction rates
ethical concerns
negative health effects
trafficked illegally
law enforcement
comprehensive education
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