You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir,

This

is to bring to your kind notice that I brought a Dell laptop from your store

last

year and I am facing technical issues with the same. I would like to add, that it is still under warranty. (Bill No - XYZ12345) Yesterday I started the laptop and it was not responding. Despite the number of attempts of restarting and shutting down, it is unable to start.

In addition

to that, the LAN cable port is not working. Due to the current situation, I work from home for a consultancy firm and facing

such

challenges would risk my job as I don't have any alternate solution to it. Could you immediately send someone from your technical team to look into it

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If you want me to come to your store to get the laptop checked,

then

also

it works for me. I am hopeful that my concern would be addressed with high priority. Yours faithfully Neha Ghai

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