You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Cole, I just read a piece published by Global Travel, writing that Fuzhou is a beautiful city in the north of China, which I think is a wrong description. As a mother town I grew up, I know it is located in the southeast of PRC. The Global Travel magazine is a famous and popular publisher I like, so as to most of the young generation. I recommend it to all of my friends. If we don't correct the mistake in the writing, It will be confused by most of the readers who live in China and will mislead travellers who want to travel to China. Though the item has been published,

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, I still reckon that we can do something to rectify the wrong information,

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as publishing another note to claim the mistake, or we can modify the correct information on the website homepage. I look forward to your respond Regards, Cole Chen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
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