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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Handwriting
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 involve craftsmanship, an artistic way of presenting letters and require a great deal of time and practice. Since students are more likely to type rather than write on paper for the rest of their
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, I do not believe that
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 skill is prevalent in
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 modern era where
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 are used both in the academic and professional arenas.
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 with, neat handwriting was a criterion for academic success in the past, but not anymore in
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 digital era. Assignments, classwork, tests and other school activities are mostly done on
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 and
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 is why a student needs to grasp the
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 of computing and typing more than presenting immaculate letter formations on paper.
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, I submitted three assignments during my
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 term and all of them were submitted to my teachers' emails, and not a single one was handwritten.
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, time invested in honing excellent handwriting can be better utilised in mastering more important subjects and
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.
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, the use of
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 and the Internet in offices is a common trend. An employee,
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, is expected to be an expert computer user, and immaculate handwriting is not a requirement to be hired by a company. Ironically, better penmanship has little value in a world surrounded by technology. Considering the future, when
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 be more predominant, parents and teachers should focus more on teaching technology to students than instructing how much a letter should be stressed or curved!
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, academic activities and professional needs, in
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 era of technology, compel students to have
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 in
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 and
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 is why it would be more practical to enhance their technical
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 rather than handwriting
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- which have already become less important.
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coherence cohesion
Your essay demonstrates good coherence and cohesion by presenting a clear logical structure with a well-connected introduction and conclusion. However, there is room for improvement in providing a complete response to the task prompt, as your arguments mainly focus on the declining importance of handwriting skills in the modern age without fully considering the extent to which children should be taught these skills. Additionally, while your ideas are comprehensive and well-supported, they could benefit from more specific examples to further strengthen your points.
task achievement
You have effectively addressed the prompt by presenting a well-structured essay with clear and comprehensive ideas. However, to improve your task achievement score, it is important to fully cover the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. Make sure to clearly express your position and provide balanced arguments both in favor and against the teaching of handwriting skills to children in the modern age. Additionally, consider including specific examples that directly relate to the impact of teaching handwriting skills on children's education and development.
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