Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? You should write at least 250 words.
Over the past decades, even though the world has evolved substantially, the education system of many
schools
has not developed together. Especially, people underestimate the problems
of bullying in schools
that most children
have to confront covertly. There are various reasons that drive these incidents, and several solutions should be taken into consideration.
The first
alarm cause of this
issue is the recklessness of parents who is doing inappropriate behaviours in front of children
. Moreover
, they have no idea that they are being imitated by their children
. Instead
of teaching good personality, parents are not conscious about
the way their Change preposition
of
kids'
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kids
learning
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learn
on
their bad attitude. Change preposition
from
As a result
, their children
replicate their bad manners and apply to
others at school, especially Correct pronoun usage
them to
at
weaker kids. What is more, Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the unproportionate
unproportionate
ratio of teachers and students in school drives Replace the word
disproportionate
this
matter worse. For example
, the teachers cannot know every circumstances
of their students if they are in charge of many classes.
There are several approaches that could be taken into consideration. Before all else, Change to a singular noun
circumstance
schools
should have subjects related to mental issues, especially in primary schools
. In fact, the first
two years of school should be taught and maintained the basic manners and attitudes of a good citizen. For instance
, in Japan, children
have no need to take tests or exams in primary 1 and 2. They are teaching mental lessons instead
of the usual curriculum. Moreover
, to cover the ratio between students and teachers, the government needs to contribute more to educational sectors in order to attract more people to become the educational workforce. Without such
a solution, it is undeniable that these problems
are unlikely to be solved.
In conclusion, the above-mentioned problems
could be solved by the given solutions. However
, if the alternative proposed solutions were to be implemented, the potential problems
could be reduced to some extent, even if not totally eliminated.Submitted by tunnaungwin11 on
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