It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects should not worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Majority of Architects build houses that are more fanciful than
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the purpose. I completely agree that contractors should focus more on producing buildings to
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more useful needs which will be very helpful in
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society.
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new housing estates for people around the localities and instructed them not to waste time on decorations .³
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetics
  • Usability
  • Wellbeing
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy efficiency
  • Practicality
  • Psychological wellbeing
  • Urban landscape
  • Structural integrity
  • Natural disasters
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