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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. to what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is very much true that verbal
communication
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 is easier, faster and more powerful than written
communication
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.
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 I would like to agree with
this
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 statement with a few relevant examples as well.
Firstly
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, we can find spoken
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 across the nations including remote locations as well. While talking with someone it does not mean that he or she must know how to write the same statement.
Secondly
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 whoever is communicating over the phone call and the message would be delivered quickly and
also
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 we can receive an acknowledgement from the receiver end.
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, if you would like to send a message to a different country and
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 choosing voice
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 is faster. It means if we decide to write a letter and send it over the mail or email , who will receive it? who will read it? how the best receiver can understand it? As per recent Google survey findings, 90% of global level communications are happening through voice exchange service and it shows the power of verbal communications.
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 undoubtedly, we may not use verbal
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 always in an advanced society.
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, while working for a corporate office which comes under the technology industry and most of the communications are happening through emails exchange which can be recorded for future reference.
On the other hand
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, written
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 can be sent across the globe without any limitations like mail between Asia to Europe countries. To sum up, verbal or written is dependent on the situation, place and need and
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 but not least whatever we are sending regardless of any medium the content should be clear to the receiver who is reading or talking from the sender.
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