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Communication between family members has decreased in recent times. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Communication
 among near and dear ones has decreased significantly in the modern world. I agree with the statement ,
however
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 some believe
otherwise
. In my
further
, writing I will elucidate my opinion with examples.
To begin
 with, in
this
 modern era, everyone is busy either with challenging work or on social media.
People
 have become so addicted to
this
 that they spend hours, without even noticing.
For instance
, young
people
 are busy making tik-tok or reels that they don't have spare time to talk to their family members.
Furthermore
, demanding work consumes a large amount of time that they left with no spare time to spend with their kids, which creates barriers in relationships.Most
of
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the
working class
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 families work extra hours to meet the needs of daily life. Lack of
communication
 weakens bonding between kids snd parents , which tends to make
people
 more stressed and unhappy. On another side, advancement in technology has provided
people
 with a lot of
communication
 means,
for example
 : video calls, facetime, messaging apps etc.
People
 can talk to their near and dear ones anytime from any part of the world, which was unimaginable a few decades ago. In conclusion,
communication
 between society has decreased. As we all know advancement in technology is inevitable, so
instead
 of getting addicted to social media
people
 should use them to make conversation with their loved ones.
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