You are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter - explain where you hide the keys - describe what your friend needs to do in your absent - say when you are coming back

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Dear Ann, How's life there? I hope

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letter finds you well. I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my house as long as I am on my holiday. I am writing

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letter to tell you some information that you need to know associated with that. As you know, I am going to leave on 2nd June, which is tomorrow morning. So, here are several things that you have to know before you come there.

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, I will leave the key under the mat in front of the door.

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, I have bought you some snacks and I will put it on the table, in front of the TV.

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, as I said before I need you to take care of my cat, Alina. I have put her food beside her cage, and usually she eats three times a day which is at 8 A.

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in the morning, at 12.30 A.

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in the afternoon, and

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at 7.00 P.

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in the evening.

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, if you have free time, please take her out of the house every morning.

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all about Alina's necessity. I will come back here on 12th June, and if my schedule goes as I planned I will arrive home at 5.00 P.

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. Thank you so much for agreeing to help me

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take care of my house

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I am not here, I really appreciate that. See you when I come back home, Ann. Sincerely, Wiwik

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You provided a friendly and suitable tone for the letter, making it pleasant to read.

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The greetings and sign-off are properly utilized, making the letter feel more personal.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

247 words

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