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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.

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In
this
 contemporary era, scientists are much busy with experiments on pets to upgrade
further
. It has often been argued by someone that research on animals is illegal and should not be practised, while many believe that these experiments are helpful to develop new findings which could certainly help in future. I personally reckon that
this
 practice of indulging in R and D can have multifarious positive outcomes which I will elucidate in subsequent paragraphs. Primarily, these findings by the scientists are useful to develop the products
further
,
in other words
, the quality of
milk
 produced from the cows can be enhanced
further
 as an example. As per the IFA journal published
last
 month, it has been revealed that the local dairy company in Mumbai operated with hybrid cattle has produced a humongous amount of
milk
 with high protein content compared to normal cattle.
Therefore
,
this
 leads to an increase in the quantity as well as the quality which is required to meet the current population.
Conversely
, peoples find it that
this
 is not justified with the animals as
this
 will lead to developing diseases perhaps.
However
, these beliefs are old fashioned as they are unaware of the process of investigation. They not only extract
milk
 but
also
 feed them good food with high nutrition values which will balance the energy. These folks should get aware of the process from the books or the internet so that they will understand it correctly.
Furthermore
, while seeing the population trend, it is not possible to rely on the old fashioned
milk
 production.
Therefore
, these experiments must go on and there are no other alternatives available. To sum up, though it is harsh to analysis on the animals,
however
, somehow it gives a positive move to maximize the products to meet the current demand as well as improve the diet.
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