In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that when the technology is developed, many advanced developments have been made in agriculture to produce crops, fruits, and
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. Despite the fact that people made farming more producible, people in the world have still problems with food shortages. In
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essay, I will describe the reasons why
this
phenomenon has happened and recommend the solutions that can overcome
this
. There are several reasons ascribed to
this
problem and one of the chief issues is
transportation
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the transportation
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of goods from one place to another. Whatever the more products are harvested thanks to the new technology, it will not be useful if they can't be used in the needed place. Sometimes,
transportation
costs are more expensive than the value of products which needed to deliver.
Also
, another reason that
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is the large money-making business companies which hold the control of the market and only sell to the places where they can make profits and that's why regions that needed the most are not able to purchase.
Lastly
, some lands cannot cultivate any trees or plants because of the local weather and soil conditions none the less there are many improvements in farming. Turning to possible solutions, the government should spend more budgets on
transportation
not only for easy
transportation
of goods but
also
for good communication and attraction of tourism.
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, building more roads from
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countrysides
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to urban cities and building ports alongside the coasts and railroad are
the
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efficient
to
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goods
transportation
. They should
also
pay more
to
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exports like flour, rice and vegetables which are
basic
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daily needs of
the
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human beings and distribute those at a low cost to the places that
needed
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.
Moreover
, affluents should donate a little percentage of their belongings to the poor because the research from the US shows that about five
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of the top ten billionaires' wealth can be solved the world's hunger problems. Overall, it can be said that
this
issue has happened because of the greed of
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and can be solved if humans don't
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so much.
However
, we should try to solve
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every possible way to overcome
this
problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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