The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Problems relating to the scarcity of houses in developed areas can lead to serious implications,which can be solved by the authorities .In my opinion,

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partially agree because,while

government

action is a major solution to

this

problem , citizens can

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render help in a specific manner to eradicate

this

issue. On the one hand ,Help from the

government

is undoubtedly the best solution to the problem concerning housing shortage.

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means that

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the availability of enough houses is dependent on how active the

government

work towards the eradication of

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of home buildings .

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,In an area consisting of hardworking parliamentarians , the development of

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province is dependent on the frequent effort of the

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evident rapid development in various parts of the city.

In addition

,when housing is made constantly available,

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improves due to increased population.

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increase in housing can be partly influenced by citizens.

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can be achieved when individuals actively involve themselves in elections by voting for a better

government

.

For instance

,if 90% population in a certain district participate in an election by voting for people who are fit for the position,the housing issues will reduce drastically.In

this

way, they solve the situation automatically and instantly.So,youngsters especially should always have their voters card readily available to vote when necessary. To conclude,in my own opinion,the

government

plays a major role in eradicating the problem of living in

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society by working hard to enable available homes.

however

,indigenes should

likewise

involve themselves by ensuring they vote during elections for a better

government

.