It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that it is too costless to admin old

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funds should be allocated to the construction of modern

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. Regarding

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essay will outline why

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should be remained and suggest other factors that should be taken into consideration.

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with, old architectures have a historical value as memorial

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. Not only can they embody comfort among citizens, but they may

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contribute to keeping national identities.

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, the government institution in Korea that was built when Japan conquered Korea has been repaired in order to illustrate the persistence and resistance of Korean ancestors. As the example clearly illustrates, old

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play a key factor in maintaining national identities. Another noteworthy thing is that old

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have esthetic meaning that tempts foreign tourists. At the same time, a significant number of inhabitants rely on

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for their living.

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, recent media in Cambodia reports that

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almost old

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lost the purpose of accommodation, most citizens want to keep these

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since old

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are an efficient means of tourism

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closely relative to

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living.   From my point of view, if governments increase entrance fees, it would solve the issue of repairing fees

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the awareness that visitors should follow rules well. What is more, penalties

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can be used to maintain old accommodations. In conclusion, while repairing old

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can sometimes be expensive, they have the historical and esthetic values that enable to maintain national identities and living.

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, governments should increase the entrance fees and penalties rather than making the modern ones.