Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As
have
been shown, violence in the majority of the playgrounds around the world Correct subject-verb agreement
has
have
been increasing considerably in the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
last
year, but the way the parents are facing this
problem remains anything but homogeneous. For some of them, their children should hit back at bullies, for others they should not do it. In this
disquisition, I will explicate why I actually agree with the first
ones by including examples and my own experience in the topic in order to add color
to the Change the spelling
colour
explanaition
.
On the Correct your spelling
explanation
one
hand, there are myriad reasons behind bullies' behavior
. The most prominent Change the spelling
behaviour
one
is that there is a strong motivation behind bullies to show themselves as stronger than their victims. In other words
, they tend to perceive their victims as weak people from
whom they can take advantage Change preposition
apply
of
to empower themselves in front of Change preposition
apply
the
others. To elucidate Correct article usage
apply
further
, some articles published by The Times have explained that each time youngsters bully their peers they are trying to gain a feel
of power and Replace the word
feeling
demostrate
they are stronger than the rest of their matesCorrect your spelling
demonstrate
,
so that the best way to respond to Remove the comma
apply
this
attempt is to hit back them. For instance
, when I was younger, one
of my classmates bullied me because my
appearance and it was not until I hit him that his harassment ended.
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of my
On the other hand
, one
of the consequences of being bullied it
is related to Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
self-esteem. Bullies tend to focus on something Correct article usage
apply
that is
unique about you trying to create an
insecurity about that. What happens is that we, as bullied people, internalize it and become insecure about ourselves. Remove the article
apply
Although
this
process cannot be solved by hitting back our
aggressors, several studies have concluded that it has a positive impact Change preposition
at our
in
our self-perception.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that violence is not going to be solved with more Change preposition
on
violence
it is Add a comma
,violence
undenaible
that sometimes works and the people who Correct your spelling
undeniable
is
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are
violentized
should respond to the intent in whatever way they can before they can be affected deeplyCorrect your spelling
violented
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