Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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been shown, violence in the majority of the playgrounds around the world

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been increasing considerably in the

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year, but the way the parents are facing

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problem remains anything but homogeneous. For some of them, their children should hit back at bullies, for others they should not do it. In

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ones by including examples and my own experience in the topic in order to add

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hand, there are myriad reasons behind bullies'

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. The most prominent

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is that there is a strong motivation behind bullies to show themselves as stronger than their victims.

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, they tend to perceive their victims as weak people

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whom they can take advantage

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to empower themselves in front of

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others. To elucidate

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, some articles published by The Times have explained that each time youngsters bully their peers they are trying to gain a

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of power and

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they are stronger than the rest of their mates

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so that the best way to respond to

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attempt is to hit back them.

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, when I was younger,

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of my classmates bullied me because

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appearance and it was not until I hit him that his harassment ended.

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of the consequences of being bullied

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self-esteem. Bullies tend to focus on something

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unique about you trying to create

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insecurity about that. What happens is that we, as bullied people, internalize it and become insecure about ourselves.

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process cannot be solved by hitting back

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aggressors, several studies have concluded that it has a positive impact

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our self-perception. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that violence is not going to be solved with more

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it is

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violentized

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should respond to the intent in whatever way they can before they can be affected deeply