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In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some argue that in the
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 are likely to be driven without humans.From my point of view, I think it can cause some negative consequences.
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 vehicles benefit society in various aspects.
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car
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 is more convenient.
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 is because human does not need to drive a
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 anymore.
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, it reduces the risk of accidents. Most
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the accidents are caused by the improvidence of the driver. Some drivers who take a high amount of alcohol have an opportunity to have a
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 accident.
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cars
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 can solve these problems in real situations.
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, it can not consume some alcoholic drinks. All of the problems that may be caused by
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cars
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 come from their program.
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, the program is now tested in many companies to prove to their consumer that it has high security. Humans will be able to use it without a doubt in the
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, there are some drawbacks to
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cars
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. To elaborate,
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 can be driven by themselves but
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 must beware when they are on the road. By the same token,
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 will not pay attention to driving and think it is not necessary. In conclusion, From my point of view, a
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car
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 is useful for
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people
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 need to pay attention a lot when they are on the road.
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,
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 have to how to drive a
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.Nobody will know if it has some unexpected situation.
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