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Some experts claim that most of the outstanding innovations and breakthroughs have been made by people with a high level of so-called ‘innate intelligence’. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on this theory in order to succeed in life for an ordinary people?

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 level
innate
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intelligent
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 are showing supremacy in opening new innovations. Depending on
this
 kind of
theory
 have several advantages and drawbacks
on
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 the life of regular
people
 and
this
 essay will discuss them. Individuals with low chances to innovate something will not waste their time. If
people
 will realize that their innate intelligence doesn’t allow them to be the part of
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the population
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 who make innovations, they will devote more time and resources
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 the fields where they are good
at
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apply
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.
For instance
,
majority
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the majority
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 of
people
 are not privileged by nature with high calculative skills and it will be better
to
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 them to do humanitarian science because they are prescribed to
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dead
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end
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 in other spheres.
This
theory
 might be used in order to discriminate
and
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 bully beginners in any
fields
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. It will be
mental
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a mental
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 barrier for
people
 who wants to achieve something in
sphere
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the sphere
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 without high inborn skills. Not everyone is gifted
nevertheless
 everyone
have
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opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to achieve high skills and deep knowledge which will be the tool
of
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for
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 them
succeed
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to succeed
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.
Moreover
,
people
 can’t realize that they have big potential in some spheres without trying to do it so they will not
found
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 their ‘place’ in
world
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the world
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.
Theory
 of supremacy of only innate geniuses effect
on
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the life of ordinary
people
 from both sides.
This
theory
 can save
people
 from wasting
of
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time on
dead ended
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dead-ended
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 doings
on
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,on
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 the other hand, it
also
 can be
reason
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the reason
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of
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for
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the
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untapped potential of
person
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a person
the person
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.
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