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Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
 consider that
people
 can evolve high
intelligence
 in themselves whereas others think that high
intelligence
 is only a gift of
nature
. I agree with the opinion that
intelligence
 mostly depends on
nature
.
This
 essay will discuss why individuals
can’t
 achieve high –
intelligent
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intelligence
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 skills and show some examples of naturally gifted
people
 with high
intelligence
. We can see a lot of successful and erudite
people
 but without the mark of
‘genius’
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a ‘genius’
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 person.
This
 kind of
people
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person
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 may have very big knowledge in a lot of spheres but it is not
the
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an
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 indicator of high
intelligence
, it is
only
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the only
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indicator
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an indicator
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 of hard work in some direction.
Index
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The index
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 of
intelligence
 (
IQ
) of individuals may be little increased
nevertheless
people
 just have
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a limit
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limit
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limits
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 in their intelligent performance and not everyone is capable to be
genius
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a genius
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. Regular
individual
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individuals
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 with regular brain
structure
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structures
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can’t
 achieve insane
IQ
 and fated to normal
intelligent
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intelligence
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 but it doesn’t mean that they
can’t
 expand their knowledge and skills to insane indicators. Individuals who have high
IQ
 are naturally gifted and differ from other
people
.
For instance
, one of the smartest geniuses in human history – Leonardo da Vinci was gifted and was
different
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a different
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 breed. His brain structure, daily habits and way of living
was
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were
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 not the same
with
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apply
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as regular
people
’s. That
kind
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kinds
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 of
people
 who have really big
IQ
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IQs
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are
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is
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 just built
different
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differently
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 from regular
people
 so
nature
 gives them supremacy.
People
 can develop their knowledge and evolve a lot of skills
nevertheless
 regular
people
can’t
 achieve
same
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the same
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IQ
 as geniuses. Intelligent
intelligence
 is predetermined by
nature
.
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