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Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often held that nature has
nature has
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a greater influence on mature human
intelligence
. While some
people
 argue that
intelligence
 is a malleable, adaptable skill that can be developed over time, others believe that a person may train himself to be very intelligent.
This
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favor
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 of the latter. On the one hand, genetics, which is influenced by nature, is one of the most significant factors impacting human
intelligence
. Genes associated
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 intellectual skills are inherited, according to research. Important cognitive aspects that have been identified in the study of the human brain suggest that they were embedded in a person even before his birth.
For instance
, many children share their parents' intellectual abilities.
On the other hand
,
people
 may improve their overall
intelligence
 by adopting lifestyle choices that support and protect
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. In many cases, an individual who worked hard and actually tried always succeeded in their
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.
This
 implies that
people
 can establish a high
intelligence
 by adopting new habits.
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 example, solving logical problems can help build critical thinking skills. In my opinion,
person’s
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intelligence
 skills
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 on his lifestyle and habits.
Therefore
, anyone can develop new abilities by training themselves. In
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, varied
people
 have different levels of ability in various occupations.
However
, I believe that
people
 can get maximal achievements and,
as a result
, improve
intelligence
 with consistent patience and effort.
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