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A new generation of entrepreneurs believe that privately funded space tourism will be the next exciting development in space exploration. How true do you think this is? How would space tourism affect space exploration as we know it today?

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I think it is very likely that
space
 travel will become a popular activity in the private sector. There are wealthy
people
 in the world who want to get
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space
, and there is
the
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 desire to take them there. All that these
people
 need is the means to achieve their aims. To a certain extent, that means is already available, and some wealthy business
people
 have already paid millions of dollars to travel into
space
. If they have done it, others will follow. Human beings have a natural tendency to go beyond their limits; it is
this
 desire to 'push the
boundaries'
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 that has motivated every explorer in the past. In the same way,
space
 is definitely
where
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 business
people
 in the travel industry are setting their sights on. In fact, newspapers say that millionaires like Richard Branson are in the process of doing test flights to the edge of
space
. So it is only a matter of time before
space
 tourism becomes a reality for the population as a whole. How that will change
space
 exploration is an interesting question. As businesses will be concentrating on making profits and satisfying a general desire for adventure, it seems unlikely that they will have any influence on the work of
space
 explorers. Essentially, the two activities are quite different; only by doing both would you make any link between them. Having
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 that, if
space
 tourism were to become popular, it is quite possible that it would raise extra money that could be channelled back into
space
 exploration in the form of enhanced technology and communications systems.
This
, in turn, might speed up the process of
space
 exploration.
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