Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

t is often argued that
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adult mind relies on natural factors more than on obtained experience through life. Both
nature
and nurture play
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significant role in forming of person, so I partially agree that human intellect has affected by
nature
rather than by non-innate properties.
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is
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of unchangeable
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stored in DNA. It means that we
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with several abilities and characteristics,
such
as physical status, IQ level, approach to
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information and so on. Everyone has
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strengths and weaknesses.
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, several body types define how easy
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can gain muscles. Initial genetic code is critically important for
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development of
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.
As a result
,
formed
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adult brain depends on opportunities given by
nature
.
On the other hand
, gens are only starter
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and
it
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can be either enhanced or diminished.
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,
mental
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abilities of human are flexible, and changes based on
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. While our inherent skills cannot be controlled by ourselves, our personal characteristics,
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a world
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world view
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, habits and communication
skill
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, are taking shape relying on our actions.
Human
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brain is always evolving, especially
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younger ages, but older ones cannot build new neuron connections.
Adult
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mind will contain nurture obtained in whole life. Eventually, everybody has
its
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natural peculiarities that
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of our strong and weak sides, but our actions and habits shape our mind. So,
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the human
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brain is
mix
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a mix
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of both
nature
and nurture.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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