Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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t is often argued that

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adult mind relies on natural factors more than on obtained experience through life. Both

nature

and nurture play

big

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significant role in forming of person, so I partially agree that human intellect has affected by

nature

rather than by non-innate properties.

Human

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set

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of unchangeable

gens

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stored in DNA. It means that we

born

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with several abilities and characteristics,

such

as physical status, IQ level, approach to

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information and so on. Everyone has

own

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their own

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strengths and weaknesses.

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, several body types define how easy

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can gain muscles. Initial genetic code is critically important for

further

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development of

person

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formed

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adult brain depends on opportunities given by

nature

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and

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can be either enhanced or diminished.

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mental

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abilities of human are flexible, and changes based on

human-activity

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. While our inherent skills cannot be controlled by ourselves, our personal characteristics,

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a world

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world view

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, habits and communication

skill

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, are taking shape relying on our actions.

Human

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brain is always evolving, especially

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younger ages, but older ones cannot build new neuron connections.

Adult

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mind will contain nurture obtained in whole life. Eventually, everybody has

its

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natural peculiarities that

consists

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of our strong and weak sides, but our actions and habits shape our mind. So,

human

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the human

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brain is

mix

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a mix

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of both

nature

and nurture.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

233 words

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Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.