You learned the news from your friend regarding a part-time job at a new international company near your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should: explain why you need that job give details of what you can do for the company suggest the time that you can work.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inquire about a part-time warehouse job in your company. Currently, I am unemployed and I need to pay my college tuition fees in order to pursue my master's degree from Conestoga College. Recently, I quit my previous job
due to
a timing issue. So I have to find another job and my close friend referred me to your company which is hiring for a warehouse executive. would like to mention my forklift driving and managing skills which can easily be used in your company.
Apart from
this
, I possessed a forklift licence issued by the government.
Moreover
, I have 12 months of experience in it. As I need to attend my classes 3 days a week. But, I will be free on Friday, Saturday and Sunday from 4 PM to 12 PM.
Additionally
, I can do overtime on those days for a few hours. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Biren Patel
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that ideas flow logically from one to the next.
task achievement
Stay focused on the main task, providing all the necessary details requested in the prompt.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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