Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be more expensive to encourge people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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The idea of whether companies ought to increase the
price
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of sugary
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in order to reduce consumption of sugar, or the
price
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should be the same as before, remains a source of controversy. In my view, I believe
people
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should be encouraged to reduce sugar intake in other ways than putting a high
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on its
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. To start with, due to the fact that a high-sugar diet brings about several side effects, the government and
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society
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always tried to put some schemes in terms of reducing carbohydrate consumption. Many researchers worked on the negative effect of improper diet, on
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's health conditions, in recent years. The research concluded that not only widespread use of glucose
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in diabetes, but
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it caused many psychiatric disorders like depression. To explain more,
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research shows that
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who do not have a restricted diet, eat more food that consists of high levels of carbohydrates which leads to obesity.
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of obesity,
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are more vulnerable to be depressed. To tackle
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problem, many societies have decided to raise the fee
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sugary
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.
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, in 2018, the UAE implemented a law that every kind of soda drink should cost triple
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ones.
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, the higher
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did not make most
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not buy it.
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law only affected the poor population who cannot afford that much money on a soda drink every day. Because of these, it seems to me that rising the fee of sugary
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by the manufacturer will not have a sufficient effect on reducing glucose intake.
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, many measures can be taken by the government,
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as increasing
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's awareness about high blood glucose diseases and their consequences. In conclusion, there should be some restrictions on using sugary foods, but cutting down their
price
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is not the best option.
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