Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter to raise my complaint regarding the severe service of your company. I have ordered a cheque book that was produced for the remarkable anniversary of our federation. I loved it at
first
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sight, and
then
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I decided to order it through your company webpage around Feb 20.
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with,
although
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my purchase was done online and the delivery date has been selected
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Feb 28 by one of your employees, I did not receive yet till the end of March. I really want to get rid of
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this
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waiting times. What is more, I saw others companies are even selling it
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in
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their physical outlets. I had pre-ordered that book to get
before
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it before
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anyone else but now I am still
in
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on
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waiting
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the waiting
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list. How long do I still need to wait? I think something is needed to be done about
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situation. I am wondering if you could arrange to deliver it within
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week. Else, I will cancel the whole
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transaction
and refund back all the money. I believe you will give
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matter your immediate attention. Regards, Tun Naung Win
Submitted by tunnaungwin11 on

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