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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
Nowadays, many young people
work
 on a volunteer basis, and
this
 can only
beneficial
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 for individuals and society. I do not agree that we should force all teenagers to do unpaid
work
. Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies and they should not think about any other
works
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work
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. School is just demanding like
as
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a
full time
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 job, and teachers expect their
student
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students
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 to do all homework and exam revision every day. When young people have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy
with
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 their friends and do their other leisure pursuits. They have many years of
work
 ahead of them when they finish their studies. At the same time, society can gain some benefits from students who
forced
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 to unpaid
work
. In fact, I argue that government
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 a group of adults to do something against their will. So
that is
 why nobody is forced
being
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 volume and
this
 is surely the best system. In conclusion, teenagers may choose if they wish to
work
 for free or help others freely, but in my opinion, we should not enforce them to do
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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