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In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit, while some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view

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Unemployed individuals receive some unjustified
money
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 every week in many countries. While some
people
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 believe that
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money
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 should not be given but others support
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 issue. I completely would not think that it is justified. Governments should not give any
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 unless something unexpected event
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 as health problems. Because being jobless is their own preference.They can
work
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 like everyone. These viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.
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 with, as long as some countries give a sum of
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, many societies do not want to
work
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.
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,
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 situation causes to do not develop any countries. If a
country
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 does not have any productive
people
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,
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country
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 is doomed to go back.
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, If governments give
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 to productive individuals rather than unemployed
people
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, their
country
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 will be able to improve fastly. Not only contribute to their
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 and
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 they can set an example to all globe.
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, with increasing jobless salary, the
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 which can give
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 will take a lot of immigrants. Because most of the population wants to move to
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 a
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.
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, in my
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, Syrian citizens are taken
money
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 by the government even though they did not
work
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. I think that citizens should
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 to it deserve ,
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 they should go back to their own
country
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. To sum up,
people
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 who do not
work
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 any job should not be given a sum of
money
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. Because Unemployment is not a choice, it is a necessity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment benefits
  • Safety net
  • Financial insecurity
  • Poverty
  • Economic stability
  • Disincentive
  • Financial burden
  • Job training programs
  • Employability
  • Root causes of unemployment
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