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In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#cities #planners #shops #schools #offices #homes #areas
There is plenty of
city
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consider
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 that diverse functional buildings should be divided into different places
instead
 of gathering them together. From my
perspctive
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perspective
, it is not a reasonable suggestion
beacause
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because
 its gains can not compensate its costs. It is
ture
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true
sure
 that if we separate functional buildings,
such
 as
,
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super markets
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supermarkets
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,
liberaries
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libraries
,
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executive
excutive
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and excutive
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insititutions
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institutions
, into different concerns of
cities
, the
cities
 can get a lot of
beniefits
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benefits
.
For example
, in a
multi-center
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city
, residents have to go
diverse
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 areas of
this
city
 to deal with their issues rather than gather
into
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in
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 one
city
center
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centre
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, so the heavy traffic would be moderated, given the traffic jam which is brought by
densely
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 population is a typical problem of modern
cities
, it is a good idea to build the
multi-center
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multi-centre
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city
.
However
, Since the building of
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a multi-center
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multi-center
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multi-centre
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city
 requires
huge
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a huge
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 amount of money to build transportation
infrastrctures
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infrastructure
infrastructures
 to connect different parts of the
city
, the cost of building
this
 kind of
city
 is unaffordable for
the
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most
of
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local
goverments
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governments
government
, especially for small
cities
.
Moreover
, if the building of
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a multi-center
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multi-center
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multi-centre
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city
 runs out
the
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 limited budget of local
goverments
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governments
government
,
other essential public service
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another essential public service
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,
for example
, the investment
on
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in
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 educational
insititutions
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institutions
, will be underfunded, which is not a positive thing for the development of a
city
 in a long term. From
above
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 discussions, it is clear to see that the gains of building the
multi-center
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city
 can not outweigh the cost of it. To sum up, even if separating functional buildings of a
city
 would generate some benefits,
but
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the huge cost of
this
 proposal prevents it
becoming
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from becoming
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 a reasonable choice for many
cities
.
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